Friday, June 7, 2024

6th chapter

 A quick update today. Took a mini-vacation with the family to celebrate my daughter, Sofie's 16th birthday. We went to Santa Cruz, CA for a couple days. The weather was gorgeous! I don't think it could have been any better. 

While the vacation was fun, it cut into my writing time. I just completed chapter 6. My word count is up to 21,578. However, I'm not in love with this chapter. There are aspects I like, but not the whole thing. I'm trying to resist much editing for this first draft, but I'm giving in on this one and going to go back and tinker with it a bit to see if I can get it closer to something I like. 

I'm exploring other ways to drive interest in the book prior to its launch. I'm not super savvy when it comes to marketing videos, but that's where it helps to have teenage kids. My daughter, Isabel, is great at making short videos. As I type this she's working on a short video for Relentless Blades. It's looking good so far. I'll be excited to unveil it.

I'm still awaiting my second-round of edits for Book One. They should be sent to me within a few days. A writer's work is never done!

Thursday, May 30, 2024

Relentless Blades: Book Two underway

 I'm happy to report that I've begun work on Relentless Blades: Book Two. As I write this, I'm four chapters, and 18,000 words into it. It's rough at this stage, but I like where it's going. It's not going as fast as I'd like, because real-life and putting the finishing touches on Book One is interfering.

On that note, Relentless Blades: Book One has passed its first round of line/copy edits with the fabulous Evelyn Cammon with redinkedits.com. She's currently working through pass two. I don't think there will be much left to finish once she sends her second round of edits. Maybe a few minor things to clean up, but it should be in great shape. She recommended a manuscript formatter for me, and I've been in touch with him, so he's ready to go as soon as the editing is complete. 

I've already found several cover illustrators I love. Once the book is formatted, and I have the dimensions, the cover art is all that remains. I'm getting both excited and nervous at the prospect of completing this long journey. By the time I publish it will have been a roughly two-year journey since September 2022 when I first sat down to create my "world bible."  

I'm very appreciative of all of you who read these blogs. As I get close to the finish line, I could really use your help in reposting my blog link or passing this on to any fantasy fans you know who may be interested in reading Relentless Blades when it's published. I'd love to generate some interest and enthusiasm!

I'll continue to update you as I go along this fascinating journey. 

Tuesday, May 14, 2024

I sympathize with George R.R. Martin

 My apologies for being absent from my blog for months. I don't have a good excuse, so I'll give you the truth. From November 2023 through March 2024, I sent out sixty-nine (69) queries seeking either a literary agent to represent me or a publishing deal with a small, independent publisher. As I write this blog, I've received thirty-eight (38) rejections and no response to the rest. Quite honestly, it depressed me and all but killed my enthusiasm to further polish my manuscript or to think about writing a sequel.

However, I'm happy to report that I've progressed through my pity-party and am re-focused on finishing up Relentless Blades, which I'm now calling: Relentless Blades: Book One - The Scepter of Cymathu. I've always hoped to be traditionally published, even though I knew it was a long shot. With self-publishing becoming more and more viable, I've reached my rejection threshold and have decided I'm going to self-publish my novel. To that end, I hired a copy/line editor and she's busy editing it as I type this. I hope to work with her the rest of this month and into June to polish it up and finish it. 

I've researched great cover artists and think I've found someone who can deliver an exceptional, original cover illustration. I don't support generic covers using stock images or those made with AI. I want something unique and created by an artist. 

My goal is to self-publish by the end of this year. 

As I wait on the first round of edits to come back, I've finally worked out the high-level plot for the next two books. It's been much harder than I thought and I sympathize a bit with George R.R. Martin. I admit to being in over my head when I started the process. I wrote what I think is a fun and interesting first book, but understood as a first-time novelist that I'd have limitations. To that end, I consciously crafted the story to be fairly linear and to focus primarily on Vig and Grim. I always knew the second book would have to expand the world, expand the characters and expand the plots. I have come to realize over the last year and a half, that I only had the vaguest idea of what was going to happen in the next two books. For the life of me, I could not figure out what story I really wanted to tell. However, I think I'm finally onto something. It's just the first draft now, but I'm happy with what I've come up with. I'll tweak it a bit more and then I should be able to get started. 

Stay tuned as I hope to have more good news to share in the coming months!

Saturday, January 20, 2024

The Dallas Cowboys

 As I write this, we're thick in the midst of the NFL playoffs. My Dallas Cowboys were humiliated last week by the upstart Green Bay Packers. It was one of the most humiliating defeats I've witnessed in over forty years of watching football. To call it an embarrassment is an understatement.

I became a Cowboy's fan in 1978 at the age of seven. This was the year the Dallas Cowboys played the Denver Broncos in Super Bowl XII.  I remember vividly how I became a fan. McDonald's used to run promotions every year for the Super Bowl. One day, about a week before the game, my Dad and I went to McDonalds and I saw banners for both teams. I didn't know, or care, much about football at that time, but my Dad asked me who was going to win. Being an animal lover, I was drawn to the horse on the Bronco's helmet so I declared that I would root for Denver. My Dad smirked at me and shook his head. I'll never forget him saying: "You never count out Roger Staubach and the Dallas Cowboys."

Anyone who knows football knows the legendary exploits of Roger Staubach. I didn't want to disappoint my Dad so I declared that I'd root for Dallas instead. The Cowboys went on to beat Denver for their second Super Bowl win of the 1970s. I still didn't follow them all that closely, but anytime a kid at school would ask me who my favorite football team was, I defaulted to the Cowboys, even though growing up in Sacramento, we were in Forty-Niner territory. 

As I got older I started watching football more and rooting for the Cowboys. Unfortunately, the 1980s were not a good decade for the Cowboys and many times I wished I'd have gone with the "home team" Forty-Niners as my team. They dominated the 80s as the team of the decade.

The Cowboy's fortunes changed in the 1990's when Jerry Jones bought the team and installed Jimmy Johnson as the coach. Although I became a fan in the 70s with Roger Staubach, Tony Dorsett, Randy white, etc., I was in my twenties in the 90's and Troy Aikman, Emmitt Smith, Michael Irvin and the rest of those teams truly became "my" Cowboys. The Cowboys won three Super Bowls in the 1990s and should have won more had Jerry Jones not fired Jimmy Johnson. We Cowboy fans were spoiled and only vaguely understood the ramifications of that firing. I knew the firing was all about ego and felt this was a bad sign going forward, but I never dreamed it would be twenty-eight years and counting without another Super Bowl victory!

As a fan, I have a love/hate relationship with Jerry Jones. I'll always be grateful for those three Super Bowl victories, but also resentful that he's so ego driven that he can't get out of his own way. It's well documented that Jerry Jones learned the NFL-ropes from Al Davis, notorious owner of the Oakland Raiders. In retrospect, their ownership tenures mirror each other. Both had early success, but then stubbornly refused to change their ways, and ultimately never won another Super Bowl. As frustrating as it is, I truly don't think Dallas will win again until Jerry Jones is gone.

Ego can be a good thing in some cases, but not in his. Jerry Jones needs to be the center of attention. He craves it! He can't handle sharing credit or the spotlight. He's one of the few owners in all sports that does more interviews then the head coaches. Speaking of head coaches, he refuses to hire strong-willed head coaches who will challenge him, and potentially pull the spotlight away from him. 

We're currently stuck with Mike McCarthy. By all accounts he's an average head coach, but has proven he can't get the Cowboys over the hump. This latest beat-down should have signaled the end of his tenure in Dallas, but Jerry is keeping him on. I don't hate McCarthy. He's a good head coach, but not great. My biggest issue is that this offseason there are two obvious coaching upgrades available in Bill Bill Belichick and Jim Harbough. When you have a chance to get a head coach of their calibur you've got to take a chance.

Dak Prescott is our quarterback, and like McCarthy, I don't think he's terrible, but he's not elite. He's a rank 8-15 level quarterback. If the rest of the team was loaded he could lead a team to a Super Bowl win, but he doesn't elevate the play of others. I fear Jerry is going to pay him elite-level quarterback pay which is going to hamstring our salary cap for years to come. 

The team is in that no-man's land area. They are good enough to produce winning records in the regular season, but not good enough to go deep in the playoffs. Having a good record means a poor draft choice, and then paying a mid-level quarterback elite-level money means the cycle of mediocrity the Cowboys have been in for 28 years continues. 

I will give Jerry Jones credit as an astute business man. He's built the Cowboys into the most valuable North American sports franchise despite no championships in almost 30 years. They are the most highly covered team in all sports. Their games consistently get top ratings. I'm sure he's raking in the money. However, this makes him complacent. He says he's all about winning, but what does winning a championship really accomplish for him? Nothing really. This is why I don't buy into his boasts about how desperatly he wants to win another Super Bowl.

I'll always be a Cowboy's fan, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't extremely frustrated. It's depressing realizing that the Cowboys won't win another Super Bowl until Jerry Jones passes away and a new owner takes over. Hopefully an owner who will hire a good general manager and a good coach and stay out of the way and let them do their jobs. Until then I'll try to comfort myself with good regular seasons and low expectations of winning a championship.  

Thursday, January 11, 2024

Short Stories

 It's been awhile since I've made an update. I've been busy submitting Relentless Blades to various literary agents and some publishers, but unfortunately nothing new to report.

I've been plotting out the next installment in the series, but in addition to that, to keep my creative juices flowing, I wrote two short horror stories for submission to Heathen Press Heathen – Thrilling, terrifying horror. They currently have an open submission period for horror stories under 7,500 words. 

The first submission is called The Werewolf of Vincennes. Unsurprisingly, the story is about a werewolf terrorizing the small town of Vincennes, Indiana. It's not a straightforward werewolf tale. It's got a neat little twist that I'm proud of. 

I've loved werewolves since I was a kid and have always felt they don't get the monster respect they deserve. They're constantly overshadowed by the likes of vampires and zombies. I've never done a deep psychological analysis on myself, but I'm sure there is some reason I've always been drawn to characters that transform into other forms. In addition to loving werewolves, the Incredible Hulk is my favorite superhero and I'm a big fan of the Transformers, particularly the dinobot, Grimlock. 

The second story is titled Daddy's Home. It deals with the fascination I've always had about what, if anything, zombies think? Zombies have saturated television and the movies in the past couple decades, but the stories are almost always told from the human point of view. This of course makes sense but has always left me wondering if the zombies think anything. This theme has been touched on by George Romero, godfather of zombies, in movies like Day of the Dead and Land of the dead. Marvel Zombies also presents the superhero zombies thinking and talking. These were inspirations for this story.

The Heathen submission period ends on January 31, 2024. I have my fingers crossed they choose one of the stories for publication. 

On a completely unrelated note, the NFL playoffs are about to start. Go Cowboys!!!!


Saturday, November 11, 2023

Finished...for now. Many thanks!

Well, after just over a year, I've completed the Relentless Blades...for now. I want to give special thanks to all those who were instrumental in supporting me along the way.

My beautiful wife, Stefanie

My sister, Julia

My beta readers: Randy Castro, Dave Dolliver, A.S. Hardin, and Addie Olds.

My editor, Robin Connelly

My proofreader, Dave Melbye

Darran Hight for his fantastic Vragoth artwork

It takes a village to raise a novel. It's been a long journey and took ten edits to get the story where I wanted it, but I'm happy with how it turned out. I can honestly say it's the best I can do and I consider it finished. I only leave it open to more edits should it get picked up by a traditional publisher and they have their editor take another crack at it. Should I not be successful in traditional publishing, I'll be content releasing it as-is.

I now begin submitting it to publishers and/or agents. Wish me luck! In the meantime, time for a little break to decompress, then it's on to planning the sequel.  

Friday, September 8, 2023

Zarune

 I now bring you a map of Zarune! Hope you find it interesting.



Check out my chat with Introverted Indies

I had a great time chatting with Lucy from Introverted Indies. Check it out.